While I do like seeing fiction valued at a premium, I’m glad The New Yorker didn’t put Mary Gaitskill’s story “The Other Place” from this/last week’s issue behind its paywall, not only because its content is important* but because its storytelling craft is so strong and interesting.
The narrator’s openness about his concerns is itself a kind of assault, at once confiding and undomesticated. The threat it announces gives the narrator leeway to be relatively leisurely—sadistically so—in revealing his story. Yet the story is lean, infrequently breaking out of narration into full-blown scenes, so that when it does the scenes land with incredible force.
Gaitskill shows just how potent and efficient non-linear narrative can be. She sets things up with a narrator relatively close to the time he’s describing. His dive back to his youth underscores the chronic nature of his tendencies and the weight of his concern, an interpretative filter which, were we in the moment with him at ten and twelve years old, we wouldn’t know to add (yet the details are vivid enough, the segments sufficiently sustained, that our temporal distance doesn’t remove us viscerally). The threat of present violence purples the past with menace, complicating our emotional reaction to the climax. With this narrator, returning to the past feels dangerous; we sense he’s not only telling us things but trying to figure them out himself, and might be as surprised as we are.
The end is at once revelatory and—appropriately, not coyly—cryptic.
An early contender for best short story of 2011, and one I’m adding to my syllabus for next fall.
*See Gaitskill’s talk with New Yorker Fiction Editor Deborah Treisman [h/t @Maud Newton]